Slice of Life 3/31

For my Slice of Life today, I decided that I am going to make it a poem that I wrote a couple months ago in Language Arts. Please leave me comments about what you think and what I can do to improve!!!

Sitting, Waiting, Worrying

the time slowly ticking by

but her heart was slowing

 
The stars shining bright

The crimson liquid pouring out

White snow starts falling on twisted metal
 

I sat there crying

Not worrying about who I should be calling

I just sat there remembering

all the times we shared
 

I’ll miss her forever

I say to myself

As red lights and sirens

start to appear